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Post by Kyle on Sept 16, 2010 17:31:38 GMT -5
Denied. There is way to much in this app that denies it from being approved, you may as well delete this one or completely re-write it.
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Post by zakennayo78 on Sept 16, 2010 19:21:14 GMT -5
Ayame, these are the following things wrong with your app. Please address them:
too young for bankai (needs to be a little older, like 100 more years)
Personality-Saying that a character could trick just about anybody implies he is smarter than just about everybody.
Z personality-Zanpakuto spirit can't be out and visible more on that below.
Un-released state-A zanpakuto would regenerate after being damaged and the realm would not be distroyed,
the realm is like a shinigami's soul, if it was distroyed so would the soul. Also a spirit outside its realm
for to long would die, muramasa is the example.
Spirit energy absorbtion with no side effects can't be aloud it is a form of gmoding. See Rules and plot.
Side effects for the soundwave move and its effects on captain class and espada, also you can't use the term rounds
to measure your moves, please use posts. Rounds could mean everybody has to post to be one round.
Vizards cant control menos at all, only espada can do so.
A mask does not allow you to shape shift, it only grants you some hollow powers. Some examples are strength, speed, energy increase, and high level vizards can use ceros.
Only the vizard leader can use gargantua on this site.
History-Needs to totally be redone. twisted manga plot, tying yourself in with characters, and misconstruing facts. For examples see approved vizards
These are all the things we found wrong with your app, please address them and repost a revised copy when you done. Thank you and have a nice day.
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